While I wait, I write.

I’m in the query trenches right now, alternating between feeling like this:

 

And this:

 

And a little of this:

So while I wait, and wait, and hope, and wait, I’ve started working seriously on my next book. It is truly the best cure for the query hangover that comes in the morning when you open your inbox to a rejection…or two (or more), depending on the day.

And while part of me is exhausted at the idea of starting OVER AT THE BEGINNING AGAIN, I’m also VERY EXCITED. There is nothing like the thrill of an idea forming; the satisfaction of getting that first line down. Being able to see the scenes play out in your head, even if the threads between them don’t yet exist. This next book is ambitious — it has a hook that will be tricky to write, and I hope I’m up for the task.

Of course, if writing isn’t helping the rejection headache, I’ve also found chocolate and alcohol (in moderation) work well, along with celebrating good news of other writers. And with each rejection, send out another query. Because if you’re not ready to deal with the rejection, you’re just not ready to be querying.

As one of my lovely critique partners says, “Just keeping going. It’s bad until it’s good.”

Wise words.

Revisions (aka WTF)

When I finished my first draft of book #2 I immediately had a glass of wine and patted myself on the back. I’m DONE! I exclaimed to my ever-patient/ever-supportive husband, who filled up my glass and let me bask in the glow of my accomplishment for a few blissful moments.

It was around the last sip of glass #2 that I remembered I wasn’t done, really. Not even close. (which sobered me up enough to have a third glass of wine) Because while I knew the book had legs, I also knew it had a long way to go to get wings. I want this book to positively sparkle before I send out a single query letter. And that takes work. Killing my darlings kind of stuff.

And then I felt like this:

Because the truth is I haven’t ever revised a full novel all in one sitting. Book #1 was revised as I wrote. Some weeks all I did was polish a chapter, rather than writing the next one.

So I vowed to do book #2 differently. I caressed and massaged the idea for a while, then I wrote an outline detailing all the plot points, character traits, and other goodies I could come up with. I engaged forced my husband to listen to my ideas and read the outline. He liked it, which immediately told me I had something (the genre is women’s fiction, so he is not the target market obviously). And then while he and my daughter spent the long weekend up at the cottage, I sat at our kitchen table and wrote nearly 20,000 words in two days. It looked a little like this:

NanoWrimo got me another 50,000 words, and by January 2nd I had finished the book.

I am not one of those writers who wants to hide her work. I am not fearful of someone telling me it sucks. So out book #2 went, in all its rawness, to beta readers and my critique partners, who together are God’s gifts to a writer. Truly. I’m also using revision workbooks and tips from other authors, and letting my own instincts for storytelling (and my experiences with book #1) guide me the rest of the way.

And with all that, hopefully by early spring this is how I’ll be feeling about the state of book #2:

Wish me luck!

Book #2

It’s been nearly three months since I’ve blogged here. (oops)

But enough about that. I’m back, and I have a few things to say.

One, I finished book #2. Like, wrote ‘the end’ finished. Here it is, printed out and ready for polishing.

It’s hovering around 87,000 words and most of them I like. Which is amazing to me. Book #1 took nearly 6 years, and now I understand why taking that long isn’t the best idea: it makes the story less sticky, the threads weaker, and the tension tenuous.

Of course now I have to edit all those words (gulp), but I’ve started and I will finish. Soon, I hope, because book #3 is calling my name…

As for a book #1 update, after 40 queries I had 4 agents read all of it and one read part of it. All rejected it, but four agents expressed interest in seeing my next project. My plan is to revisit book #1, to take the valuable feedback (which I agree with), and to rewrite it. But not yet. First I need to give book #2 some wings.

I have a few plans for this space. I’m going to continue (hopefully more regularly) writing about writing. I also hope to put up links to contests and post other resources for writers. And I’m going to blab about my own project(s), even if just for my mom, my CPs, and a few of my kind social media friends.

So on that note, here’s the blurb for book #2:

The Doctor’s Daughter: Surgeon Penley Attwater returns to her tiny, hackneyed hometown to take over her dead father’s medical practice, bringing with her a shocking pregnancy and a mysterious genetic legacy, whose secrets jeopardize the life she’s come to love.

 

Blog hop time!

Even though I’m deep into NaNoWriMo (okay, not exactly ‘deep’ seeing as it’s only day 2…), I wanted to take a few minutes to respond to this blog hop. One of my lovely critique partners, Abby (*waving, Abby!*) tagged me, and because I try to do what she says (at least when it comes to my manuscript), here are my answers:

Where did you get the idea for your book?
The idea for my WIP (work in progress), tentatively titled ‘The Doctor’s Daughter’, came from a lunchtime chat I had with the lovely Jenn Reynolds, a magazine editor I work with. I actually ended up writing a story on the topic, but there was one particular question she put to me that made me ask … ‘What if?’ And it all flowed from there.

What’s the genre of your book?
Women’s Fiction.

Which actors would you choose to play the characters in your movie?
Hmmm. Haven’t thought about this before. But am thinking about it now…

My elevator pitch:
No real pitch yet, as I’m only partway through a first draft. But here’s the main gist of the story:

A young surgeon’s choice to return to her tiny hometown and take over her Dad’s medical practice after he dies is determined by the result of a pregnancy test…a pregnancy with a very surprising twist!

Obviously there’s a lot more to it, but I’m not far enough in yet to really describe the highlights. I will say I’m writing some nice romance elements into this one … and the teensiest bit of magical realism.

Will your book be represented by a publisher or self-published?
Dear Gawd, I hope it will (one day) be represented by a publisher!

How long did it take you to write the first draft?
I started writing it September 2. My goal is to have a first draft done, or nearly done, by the end of NaNoWriMo, so November 30th. Then the editing begins!

What other books compare in your genre?
I think if you crossed the movies Hope Floats with Doc Hollywood, and added in a dash of Practical Magic, you’d have something similar : )

Who or what inspired your book?
Well, Jenn definitely asked the right question that day!

What else about the book might pique the readers’ interest?
There’s a much bigger theme in this book about the idea of family – what constitutes a ‘family’ and how far one will go to create, and protect, that.

I’m not going to tag anyone right now, because I know many are toiling away at NaNo…or busy living life : )

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